Sunday, October 7, 2012

Exercise 1: FORMAL LANGUAGE



ORIGINAL:

Do you want to have a lot of friends? Almost everyone do have and I'm sure you are belong to that. But it is a good thing if you are a true friend to your friends. This is how you attract many people to come to you and it gives a reason to the people surrounds you to want to build relationships with you.

CONVERSION:

Do you want to have a lot of friends? Most of people considered to have lot of circle of friends and it has a tendency that you luckily belong to that category. But it is more prefer if one considered himself/herself a true friend. By this reason most probably one tremendously attract  people to get friends with him/her and much more gives a reason for the people surrounds him/her to want to build a relationships with him/her. 

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